Television and Radio Advertising Writing
"Radio is on its way out," doomsayers have proclaimed for years now, even as far back as the beginning of television advertising. Indeed, new formats and technologies are changing the face of radio, yet here it still is. Two facts remain true: Radio still needs advertisers, and radio remains the most cost-effective of broadcast advertising mediums. So, as a sole proprietor, you may wish to learn to write for radio (particularly if your copy writing skills are improving, but you can't afford an art department.) As an in-house copywriter, you may have to learn to write for radio if you wish to remain in-house.
Since there's no visual element involved, once you learn the basics, you can write radio copy very quickly. You could also e-mail your radio ad to a station and hear it on the air within the hour! How many other broadcast mediums can come to life at that rate of speed?
For business owners, there are several other advantages to radio advertising:
- Pre-segmented markets: Each radio station tends to aim for a different demographic: young urbanites, women, retirees, news listeners, sports fans, etc.
Adaptability : A good radio ad can easily be translated into a television spot, "webisode," or print advertisement -- with a few alterations.
Ease of experimentation: You can try radio ads briefly, see if they're effective for you, and either continue with them, or stop without suffering significant financial losses.
Simple format: A 60-second radio advertisement, with a single announcer, can be one paragraph (see the example below).
JOB: :60 Radio
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As you can see, radio ads are among the simplest of written advertising formats. You can make them more complex -- and more entertaining -- by adding music, special effects, and multiple narrators:
JOB: :60 Radio
TITLE: "That DJ can SCRATCH!"
MUSIC: (Hip-hop song goes into "Scratching," keeps going.)
BOBBY BOB: Yo, that's a cool CD you got, Homes! That DJ can SCRATCH!
STEVIE STEVE: Yeah, he's got mad skills.
MUSIC: ("Scratching" sounds more like a skip.)
BOBBY BOB: Yo, he's scratchin' a little too much, ain't he?
STEVIE STEVE: Yeah. Awww, man it's the CD that's scratchin'! Man, that was my favorite CD, and now I gotta toss it out.
SFX: CD being ejected.
BOBBY BOB: Whoa, chill that, Homes! Let me see it.
STEVIE STEVE: Yo, what are you doin'? What's that you're puttin' on it?
BOBBY BOB: It's called Scratch-Out, Homes -- works on CDs and DVDs with a fast and permanent repair for scratches, guaranteed!
STEVIE STEVE: Guaranteed?!
BOBBY BOB: Check it, Homes! Pop it back in!
SFX: CD going back into player
MUSIC: Song continues without scratching
STEVIE STEVE: Alright! No scratches! You da man, Bobby Bob! Where can I find Scratch-Out?
BOBBY BOB: Scratch-Out's available at all Blockbuster locations for a limited time, Stevie Steve! Now crank that baby up!
ANNCR: Scratch-Out repairs games, music, movies and more -- quickly and permanently -- for just $5.99.
Guaranteed to work, or your money back. For participating retailers, go to www-dot-scratchout-dot-com.
When you write for radio, consider the following:
3. Help the announcer help you. Most announcers, DJs, and voiceover actors can make sense of even the most problematic, amateur scripts, but don't shoot them in the foot by providing one.
A. Avoid highly technical jargon, slang, and hard-to-understand words. These can baffle both your announcer and your listeners.
B. Use correct punctuation. In radio, a "double dash" (--) signals a short pause, as do ellipses (...), but don't use hyphens (-) in their place, as the announcer will pronounce these differently.
C. Underline or capitalize which words you want emphasized. Either one should be sufficient to clue in the announcer, but underlines are preferred. Do use them sparingly, however.
D. Avoid alliteration ("Poison Pests Permanently with the Penetrating Power of PLAGUE!") as it annoys your announcers.
7. End with an invitation to listen further, to call your company, to challenge your claim, to visit your site, to take you up on your offer, or even with a brash command to buy. The words "Act now," and "Call us today," are always used because it's always easier for a consumer to not act. If you don't end your radio advertisement with an invitation, you've wasted your creativity, money, and time.
If you're writing for a company that requires copy for television ads, or if your own company is ready to put an ad on television, pat yourself on the back for getting this far. You're in the big leagues now.
With the larger rewards come larger challenges. Television is the most expensive advertising medium, so you have to hone your marketing message down to razor sharpness. Your writing will supply the visual idea, the narration in the advertisement, and/or the dialogue your announcer or actors use to influence a buying decision. Seconds count, so there can't be any "fat" in your writing. You can be glib, entertaining, shocking, or informational. In fact, you'll need to be one or more of these if your television advertisement is to be noticed and/or effective.
The writing style for television is much like radio, except you have a visual element, as well as an aural one. You deliver each one sequentially broken down by scenes (basically, any time the picture changes), in columns, like so:
Commercial opens on a packed BAILIFF
COURTOOM; close on a big old Will the defendant
BAILIFF. Please RISE for sentencing!?
Close on the judge's placard JUDGE TAKYA
(The Hon. SHEILA TAKYA) Well, Mr. Sloane, it
And the Judge, attractive, . Seems like you've been under
The Defendant (SLOANE) is SLOANE
Panicked, shaking, his suit DRENCHED No, NO!!! Well, maybe just a little.
Rubbing her hands together. I think you need a good, long
Weird metal cylinder by security guards. I'm giving you a whole YEAR.
His face pleads through a plexiglass window.
SLOANE drops out of the cylinder JUDGE TAKYA
screaming. SFX: Gavel-slam
The Jury-Box flickers between the courtroom JUDGE TAKYA (OC*)
And the Wave-Pool where all the jurors are YOU and your FRIENDS also
Drenched under an oncoming wave. Get FREE PARKING AND
merchandise with a year's pass.
SFX: Wave-splash/gasps & laughter
Everyone in the COURTROOM is now JUDGE TAKYA
In Beach attire and stampeding for the Everybody who wants the SAME
Doors. Deal, get to WILD
WATERPARK NOW!!! Court's
Cut to a PAN SHOT of WILD ANNOUNCER
WATERPARK, featuring all kinds of WILD WATERPARK is open
Spills & thrills. Rain or shine, 7 days a week,
SUPER** the Park's logo, 800 number just minutes from Tampa!
And website address. For a limited time, get a
Resuming the courtroom: JUDGE TAKYA
Sheila throws her black robe over the And Henry: Lose the black socks.
Bailiff's arms, revealing her in a bikini.
(Bailiff is wearing XL swim trunks now)
JUDGE Exits while Bailiff stares down in
SUPER** the park's logo & information again. FADE.
* "OC" means "Off Camera"; the speaker is heard but not seen.
** "SUPER" means to "superimpose" graphics over the scene.
Television advertising lends itself to a variety of strategies. The example above is Comedic, which many television advertisements use. These are the advertising equivalent of "Shaggy Dog stories" where a funny but mostly irrelevant story is told, then linked to the product at the end. These seek to invoke an emotional response within the viewer (in this case, a laugh, combined with the catharsis of a "cooling off period.") Some actual benefits are mentioned, but they're saved for the end. This sort of television advertisement relies on word of mouth from the viewer ("Did you see that ad for Wild Waterpark?"). It's also bolstered by public fascination with courtroom scenarios.
Other strategies include Demonstrations ("WATCH as new MOLD MURDERER makes patches of Mold disintegrate on contact"), Endorsements ("Hi, I'm Billy Burr, one of your local farmers. I didn't think I'd ever need to call on Farm State Insurance, but when a meteor struck my hen house, Farm State was right there for me!"), Jingles (Your copy set to music: "Keep the Bacardi pouring, right this way, I need a refill, hit me please, hit me glass again"), and Dramatizations ("Here's your car impacting a school bus with regular tires.Now, here's your car almost impacting a school bus, because you chose Lockjaw tires!") And there are variations of each; a famous watch commercial combined a Comedic ad with a Demonstration ad by having an elephant step on one of its famed watches and unfortunately destroy it. Its overall message was, "Our products are not as infallible as we'd like them to be, but look, it takes an elephant to destroy them."
To create a successful television commercial, watch television commercials. This is fairly uncomplicated, since they blare at us every few moments a television's turned on.
Still, ask yourself: What makes one commercial clever, and what makes another one stupid? If you were the copywriter, what would you have done differently? Most importantly, look at the ads created by your competitors. How can you make your product or service seem superior to theirs?
For television advertisements, what you write for your particular product or service will probably be determined by your advertising budget. If you're writing for an established brand like Coca-Cola, Ford, Budweiser, or United Airlines, you may be told the sky is the limit and you can let your imagination run riot. In fact, large corporations tend to use larger-than-life advertisements wherever possible.
You will, however, need to wrap up your message within the time constraint necessitated by your particular slot -- for instance, 15 seconds, 30 seconds, or 60 seconds. So use the example of the radio advertisements in the previous section and time your ad after your write your first draft, so you don't go overboard (and over-budget).
If you're writing your first television advertisement for your own company, you probably ought to write with cost savings in mind. There are three types of formats to consider:
All of these can use the same format as the WILD WATERPARK commercial previously mentioned, but you may be able to create a live commercial "off the cuff," just by being able to film your company doing something extraordinary. For example, one industrial air-conditioning company was contracted to place an A/C unit on the roof of an apartment building. They didn't have the space to use conventional cranes, and time was running out. They hired a helicopter to put the rooftop unit in place, and a savvy employee videotaped the helicopter doing just that. The footage was used later in television and print marketing to great effect, at a cost of almost nothing.
Direct-response television involves longer blocks of airtime ("paid programming" according to your cable channel directory) that you can purchase and devote specifically to your product. The format is normally one of a "talk show" where an announcer "interviews" you or a spokesperson, and/or demonstrates your product, with multiple testimonials and repeated offers to buy. Direct-response television could be construed as "infomercials," but that needn't be a negative term. Direct-response television has been very successful for its participants, if your product warrants it, and if you adhere to certain marketing guidelines. Consider the following:
5. Use multiple contact and/or buying offers: Don't go through your whole show and leave the buying information for the very end. Superimpose an 800-number and your website information throughout the show or commercial, and ensure your host mentions it at least three times. Don't forget, many of your viewers will be channel-surfing and land on your show. You may grab their interest, but if you don't give them a method of buying soon, they're apt to surf elsewhere.
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